Song of the Forest

It's easier to write good poetry about emo things because people form bonds to the things they have been through, or the emotions they feel.
Things like physical beauty you see are a lot harder to portray because it's not something you feel. That's were true kill comes in, which you exemplified perfectly here. I especially like the line about dandelions, because I've always loved them and never understood why people would call them something as horrible as a weed

good job!!